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Point of View
This Point of View helps the story because it makes the story more mysterious because not much is known about Emily and the reader doesn't understand a lot until the end of the sorry.
Some of the bad things about 3rd person point of view is not understanding why some characters do what they do in the story.
This is good because the story is not biased to one person and has most of the characters opinions.
This story has a 3rd person point of view.
This story could be changed by having the point of view of Emily and you could understand more but it wouldn't be as much as a mystery, or Emily's worker's view of the story and you could have an inside look at what's happening in the house but not everything that Emily did.